Your subject line is the gatekeeper, get it wrong, and your email dies unopened. In this show, Jérémy Grandillon and Lauren Goodell are going to break down what actually makes cold emails get read and replied to.
We’re not talking theory. You’ll see live, real-time rewrites of audience-submitted cold emails, from subject line to first line, and learn exactly how to fix the mistakes that kill your open and reply rates.
Expect frameworks that are easy to use right away, like how to balance curiosity with clarity, personalize without overdoing it, and keep your message short, sharp, and human.
By the end, you’ll walk away knowing how to write subject lines that earn opens, intros that hook attention, and messages that actually get replies.
We’re not talking theory. You’ll see live, real-time rewrites of audience-submitted cold emails, from subject line to first line, and learn exactly how to fix the mistakes that kill your open and reply rates.
Expect frameworks that are easy to use right away, like how to balance curiosity with clarity, personalize without overdoing it, and keep your message short, sharp, and human.
By the end, you’ll walk away knowing how to write subject lines that earn opens, intros that hook attention, and messages that actually get replies.
What You'll Learn:
How to write subject lines that earn opens
Ways to tighten your cold email copy for clarity, flow, and instant impact
How to balance personalization and scale so every message feels relevant